2017年04月03日

TOEIC SW スピーキングの問題解決 Q10の問題を書いて添削煮出してみた


昨日、このブログ記事で↓↓↓↓↓「書いてみようかなー」って言ってましたが
TOEIC SW Speakingをオンライン英会話で練習

珍しく、すぐに実行。
フルーツフルイングリッシュに提出したものが昼間には戻ってきてました。

買っておいたチケットがまだ余っているので
600字以内で1枚のチケットでおさまるように書きました。


Hi, Dan. I am Jun from ABC (A)card Card. Thank you for your call saying that you have not received your new credit card (B) yet and need it immediately for your business. We are really sorry about (C)thatthis situation. Due to a glitch in our computer system, we have not been able to send cards to some (D)customersof our customers. (E)But However, we have arranged to deliver the card so that you can get it today or tomorrow morning at the latest. Thank you for (F_)long-time business with us so far.(_F)your long-time patronage. We will make as many efforts as possible to improve our services (G)and will satisfy youto satisfy you. If you have any concerns, feel free to contact us at 555-1234. Thank you.


Lv4 ほとんどネイティブの書いた英文と同じレベルに達しています。


先生からのメッセージは。


Hello there,

You've done a great job on your assignment today!

Your efforts are wonderful. I've corrected the problem areas of your sentences to correct them and make them more refined and natural. Please enjoy reading and learning from the corrections; I'm sure you will learn a lot!

Let's not use "but", the conjunction, at the beginning of the sentence; "however" is a perfect replacement, and we use "but" as a conjunction after a comma. Also, when someone has been doing business with us for a long time as a customer, we thank them for their "patronage" - being a customer.

I hope this of help! As always, it's a nice idea to review the corrected text by reading it out loud a few times, to help you become familiar in a written and spoken way, the sentences above!




へぇ、but はカンマのあとなのか。。

そうそう、patronageだね!!!


っていう、音読を勧める
大好きな先生の添削でした。


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